February Poetry Contest

[Fwiffle]

Yaa! Second ever Poetry contest. Aren't you just jumping in your seats? xD

Okay, this months theme is WINTER! Oh yeh, you didn't see that one coming did you?

All you have to do is write a Poem or song on Winter. Absolutly anything on winter. Make it as exciting as possible! Cause I get bored easily.
There is no limit on how long or short it has to be so let your imagination run wild!

The winner gets 2 Awesomesauce and as a bonus, the first person to enter gets 1 too! =D

Make sure you have your entries in by 26th February! I won't accept any late entries.
Post them right here on this thread and any questions on the 'Poem Contest info and Stuff' thread. (Ignore all the spam)

Okay, thanks. And good luck.:highlighted:

[Malum]

The snow fell from the sky,
and on the ground,
they came to lie.

I watched from the window,
as they floated down,
piling up in the meadow.

I looked up at my mom,
she sighed and nodded,
"Just please be calm"

I yelled and popped up,
running to get dressed,
While I gallop.

I ran out into the snow,
Putting on my gloves,
sticking my tongue out as I go.

LOL I'm horrible at poems WHY?!?!?

[Elip]

Dibbuns one, dibbuns all,
Come to the feast pr’pared in Great Hall,
Over three dozens of food types at least
And presents await after we finish our eats. For today is Christmaaaas!

Now we sit, an’ bow our headsss,
As dear Abbot says graces over our drink and breadsss,
What a wunnerful feast, we all agree,
Surrounded by friends and loved ones so happy,

So dibbuns one, and dibbuns all,
Fill your cups with drink, and pile food on plates tall!
Enjooooy the amazing Christmas feast,
At the Abbey of Redwall!

And when we are dooone,
‘Tis presents for every dibbuuun!
Presents from friends, and me t’you,
I see yore new, so I got you two!

And as we enjoy our great gifts with friends,
Such a loverly time,
‘Tis happiness times ten,
We stay awake and play til Christmas’ eeeeeeeend!

Now walk dibbuns, one an’ aaaAAAaaal,
Up to our dorms in slow pace,
Drowsy smiles on each face,
We rest our heads so haaaAAAaapilyeee,
Oh what a wonderful, Christmaaaas feeeeast!

((Don't beat ya'self up too hard Malum. You'll be surprised how good you'll get with poems after a couple months of spamming ;P )) ;D

[Riveneye]

I made this poem in the dead of night.
Simply because what I saw would be forgotten by new light.
But enough with my chatter.
Because when Fwiff is listening I am the batter.

The window in my room is clouded with snow.
It’s really cold outside. I know it is so.
I wipe it heavily with my sleeve.
And looking below I see Sister Screeve.

Dibbuns are playing everywhere on the lawn.
Everyone is up on this snowy winter dawn.
Within minutes, not hours, snowforts are built.
One emotion from not helping is guilt.

As soon as the snowballs are packed all good and tight.
All who are present have a nice big snow fight.
Snow will be flying until everyone is cold.
Then they’ll come inside to the fire gleaming like gold.

Gathering around everyone bows their face.
While the humble father abbot says grace.
Every year the same thing will happen.
Friends will come together; jokin, feastin, and laughin



((Once again Elip bests everyone with his long ballads. Or will he.?? Guess we'll find out.))

[Fwiffle]

--Closed--

You ready for the winner! =D


Now Malum, let me tell you this, you are not horrible at poems. All it takes is a little practice. ;D Besides, I loved yours, you where the only person to do each verse on three lines instead of four! It's so much harder to do like that, I think you did a really good job. It was very beautiful. I especially like the it about sticking out your tongue. Hehe
Plus you get 1 awesomesauce for entering first too!

Haha, Elip I am going to have to find a subject where you just can not include food. xD I love how you changed it from Winter to Christmas, I didn't think of that it was a good idea. ^_^

And last but not least Riven.
I think your entry was absolutely beautiful. The rhyming was amazing and very cleverly done. I love how you started it too.



It was a very tough contest, I think (no, I know!) they were all absolutely brilliant! But there can only be one winner and that has to be....

RIVENEYE! ^_^
(And not just because he included me in it. xD)

Congratulations! 2 awesomesauce are now yours!
Thank you everybody for entering!

[Riveneye]

Oh wow thanks Fwiff. I'm so happy to be back after several weeks.

[Malum]

Hey, I know a subject with no food.

A battle, or a famine!