The lost fanfiction...

[Dartpaw]

First off....
I was just looking through my old story files.
And found a really really old Redwall Fanfiction I wrote.
(This one is actually pretty cool, I can't believe I never put this up anywhere and that I forgot about it)
I think I wasn't on the ROC at the time, I took a year off from DAB and wasn't in any clubs. (Or more likely I'm pretty sure it was when DAB went down)
I was just reading it and don't even remember any of this... so it was new to me the same as it is now new to you.
(And for the sake of being a really early story I am not editing anything in this. What I wrote is what you see... nothing will be altered. So there will be a few things that might not seem right... or confusing.)


My name is Adam Bond I am fifteen years old. It is the year 2075
I have been going through my grandfather’s old stuff in the attic and found an old poster. It was quite nice but intriguing it said Redwall friend and foe. With animals all over, ones that looked a little scary on the outside and good ones on the inside they looked cool and I went through more and found another poster Tribes of Redwall badgers.
Under that I found books. Lots of them that I’ve never even heard of!
Mossflower, the legend of luke, marlfox. They looked like they may be good books so I sat down and started reading mossflower.
After reading for a while I decided I liked it, it was a fantasy setting almost medival like lord of the rings but with animals like the wind in the willows, a concept I’ve never heard of.
I quickly went to the Datawall. A box that when you push a button a digital screen appears out of it in mid air in the middle of the room like a hologram but you can push buttons on it and move things around with your hands but anyway I went on Wikipedia (Yes that’s still around) Looked up Redwall and Brian Jacques.
The books have become classic but public domain but long forgotten… people still read it. but virtual books got really popular (Virtual books were created thirty years ago in which you put a helmet on your head and you actually virtually see what is happening as you read but it’s not like going there, actually nothing close at all… it’s like watching a movie but like you’re among them, the characters can’t see or hear you and you can’t touch them. Like the diary memory or pensieves in Harry Potter)
But the estate of Brian Jacques didn’t want his books to be all technological so they never did that to Redwall and it fell into obscurity.
(Man this is getting depressing… but don’t worry it’ll pick up.)
‘Adam are you done cleaning the attic?’ My mom called.
‘Almost!’
‘Well Hannah and I are going to the park’
I didn’t want to go… I wanted to know more about Redwall.
I took out all the books in the box in the attic and there were a lot of them.
There were over twenty books in two different hardcovers and three or four sets of softcovers.
I found a note on the bottom.

‘I love Redwall it was my life and my greatest fulfillment was collecting them all I was obsessed.’
I’m like what the heck!? What does that mean?
(I read more)
‘My love for Redwall was so great I actually created an invention that can open paths to fantasy worlds. It is quite possibly the greatest invention ever… but I didn’t patent it. Just think if I mass produced it people would be going to Redwall and Narnia and Middle-Earth and making tourist traps and spas and such… I couldn’t ever forgive myself if that happened so I spent my last years traveling other worlds. In Marlfox British hardcover page 274 I put my invention there but please do not try to mass produce it I beg you but it doesn’t matter for if someone takes it apart to find out how it works it will explode into dust. But if you want a little adventure push the button for three seconds and stop while holding the book you want to enter.’
I thought what the heck, I picked up the latest Redwall book ‘If this really works you old coot, you are a genius!’
I held it for three seconds but nothing happened so I held it for five more seconds but then realized I had to let go for it to work and I felt dizzy like I was in a really annoying elevator and suddenly everything jumped then stopped.
I was still in my house. ‘What!? I’m supposed to be in Redwall! But I went downstairs and there was no power I went and got a rootbeer from the fridge and then I noticed my arm was red and furry!
‘Ahhh!!!!!!’ I looked in the mirror I was a squirrel still wearing my clothes. I wasn’t that shocked since around 2051 the new punk fad, (After piercings and tattoos) was getting your genes altered to have cat ears or Wolf tails and claws or dog noses etc. And everyone had some sort of animal part but still it was surprising.
I opened the door and my house was in the middle of the woodlands.
I then thought where am I? But then started wondering where was I before? That jump seemed to have made me lose a bit of my memory I knew my name was Adam and this was my house with electronics but even the electronics that don’t need electricity (There’s a lot in 2075) didn’t work. I decided to get my memory back by looking at photos but only one of the people looked familiar. I then started Reading more Mossflower and when I finished I would go into the woods and explore that would be cool.
To be continued!

[Dartpaw]

Part 2/5

(OOC: Coincidentally this was written before the 3DTV was really made)

I didn’t who I was or why I am a squirrel, I can only remember back to when I read the directions about pushing the button while holding the book. I think since I held it five seconds extra before releasing the button it made me go a little too far into the book making me Redwallish and transporting my house as well instead of just me.
If I had held the button for a whole minute the entire street or maybe even whole town would end up here.
Maybe this was too dangerous for anyone. But if this mysterious person didn’t want it mass produced why didn’t he just destroy it?
I found the root beer I put on the counter and started drinking it and sat in a cushy bean-bag chair and read more Mossflower then I realized why read it? I am in Mossflower! But it didn’t hurt to research this place by past adventures I just wanted to finish it so badly but I got up and put the book down and opened the door and walked out.
My house was in the middle of the woods as if it crashed from the sky. I almost thought of checking to see witch feet sticking out from under it. I can’t believe I remembered The Wizard of Oz but I only lost memories of who I was and who my family were.
The woods were calm and no wind, the trees loomed over me and as I walked leaves crunched under my feet and I decided to take my socks off since my furry paws were built in socks.
The problem is I was born with no sense of direction at all and was nervous of getting lost, so I kept my home in view at all times.
I then heard funny noises like whooshing from the trees. In Mossflower lady amber commanded the Mossflower squirrels and they could jump from tree to tree instantly without being seen or heard. Someone could be watching me this very minute and being the nervous person as I was I ran back inside.
My 3DTV still had no power I thought if I could turn it on I’d remember who I was. It’s like a regular TV but in the 2070’s every television show was 3D you didn’t even need those primitive glasses. I went back to the attic and looked for the metal thingy that brought me here but it was gone.
I looked everywhere for it but I couldn’t find it so that mean’t I am stuck here. I picked up the empty box that the books were in picked it up (Heavy) and threw it on the ground in rage!
I heard a snap.
The wood cracked and I heard a fizzing ‘NOO!!!!’
I had dropped the box on a piece of Redwall poster but under the poster was the thin metal thing I used to get here and it broke in half!
I held the two broken pieces in my hand and knew now I couldn’t get back home.
(Wherever home was)
I sadly walked downstairs to the kitchen and could hear something rattling in there.
Someone was going through the fridge. (Fridges in 2075 aren’t that much different than regular fridges except that they are more compact, yet can hold more… and food can’t ever go bad in it. It keeps food fresh for years.
‘Yeah! Carrots! Pears! Ahh… plums…’ The person said.
‘I walked over and the open door was facing my direction so it was blocking his view from me (Vice versa) I coughed.
‘Oh! Boiling badgers is this your spread?’
The door closed and a young hare stood in front of me.
‘Yes it is, you are trespassing and looting my home’
‘Your home? I didn’t know, sorry y’know this is the strangest looking home I’ve ever seen.’ He must have seen the off TV and the futuristic furniture which is pretty much like normal furniture just fancier.
‘My home is your home though, I don’t even know who I am. Funny eh?’
‘My name is Patrick Wotwither I’m a hare doncha know my father was a hare my grandfather was a hare my grea….’
‘A hare! I get it!’ I said.
‘Actually I was going to say rabbit. They are very close to hares but different and my ancestor was one I tell that to everyone I meet.’
I sighed. ‘They’re exactly the same.’
‘There are differences, I’ll tell you first the ears… blah blah blah… and our tails are shaped… blah blah.’
As he was talking I went to my room. My bed usually floats in the air with a durarope ladder attached. But since our power went off it crashed to the floor. But I got in and closed my eyes and tried to get some sleep.
Durarope is a soft creamy kind of rope that can stretch very far and get really short, and length you want. And I couldn’t sleep so I got back up and tasted my Rootbeer. It was flat. The hare was still talking I assumed him crazy.
‘And that was how my uncle Blathers married an owl you know I’m part owl right? Well I’m not. he married her but no children. Makes sense though Wot? I mean Owls and hares can’t have children or they’d be half owl half hare and that’s just crazy!!’


My head was spinning from all that was happening I felt dizzy I needed a soda.
‘Mister Hare? Can you please get me a Soda?’
‘Pardon me?’
‘In the fridge uh, metal box downstairs inside are cylinder shaped beverage containers can you bring me one? If so you can stay all you like.’
‘You mean live here!?’
‘Sure!’ In my right mind I wouldn’t have asked him for a soda or said that he could live here but I was just so depressed and stressed out from all that was happening I think I was having some sort of world travel lag.
He went down and brought up some. ‘All I could find were these labeled Coka I don’t know how you possibly get drinks in sealed containers like this.’
I opened one and drank, he did the same and we both chatted.
‘Tastes awful syrupy… nice but not as good as Tundil Pine’s. He’s the cellarhog at Redwall.’
‘Redwall? What’s that?’ I knew the books were called Redwall but Mossflower didn’t seem to mention it yet and that was the only book I’ve read so far so it’s only natural that I didn’t know.
‘Redwall!? It’s just the greatest place ever!! If you haven’t been there you’ve never call yourself woodlander I’d take you but I can’t remember the way.’
I went back to the attic and looked through the books again for something. I didn’t mention it in the story yet because I didn’t think it was important but I got it.
In a booklet called Redwall Map and Riddler it had a full colour map of the whole area of Redwall I thought it would come in useful.
I carefully separated it from the booklet and went back downstairs and spread it on the table.
Patrick looked at it curiously. ‘A map? That is a great looking map whoever drew it must have been good but where’s Loamhedge?’
‘What?’
‘It’s a place to the south, Southsward is there but not Loamhedge.’
I didn’t know what he was talking about, I asked him. ‘Where would this Loamhedge be in comparison to Southsward?’
Patrick ran his paw along the bottom of it. ‘Southsward is a little further south to it and to the west closer to the shore.’
I needed some fresh air, I stepped outside.

‘How about we go to Redwall?’ said Patrick.
‘The map will help?’ I asked.
‘Of course, it’s pretty accurate but it will be a little journey.’
I went back in and we got some bags filled it with all the food we could carry and I brought some small paperback Redwall books because they would make good reading on the trip.
Patrick said. ‘I’ll carry the food you carry the rest.’
If I had known about the eating habits of hares I would have carried the food, but I didn’t and we started off towards the mysterious Redwall.

[Dartpaw]

Part 3/5 (I should have changed quicksand to swampland but like I said I do not want to alter this, being so old I find it sacred almost.)

Patrick and I set off on our journey.
I asked him. ‘Where exactly are we on the map?’
‘We’re somewhere in Mossflower woods I don’t know where though.’
I felt annoyed. ‘If you can’t pinpoint where we are isn’t having a map kind of pointless?’
Patrick laughed. ‘That’s okay I’ll find Redwall anyway as long as we don’t run into any danger.’
‘Danger?’
Patrick counted his fingers as he spoke. ‘Quicksand, Flitchaye, Poison oak, the painted ones, Snakes, and the common vermin that will try and kill us, I can say more.’
‘Please don’t.’
We trekked all day and my footpaws were killing me. ‘How much further?’
‘Consult the map’
‘But we said earlier that the map was useless!’
‘Then just stop complaining and trust my instinct’
I had to rest, my feet were so tired. ‘Let’s stop and take a break.’
‘Okay.’
Patrick pulled out a bag of chocolate chip cookies.
‘Where’d you get those?’ I asked.
Patrick was stuffing his face with them. ‘Uh… In a jar in your kitchen.’
I was hungry ‘Pass me one please. you know I made these last week.’
‘Really? They are good.’
I sat down on the nice spring grass. ‘It’s funny I remember everything, the cookies, every book I’ve ever read, school, but I can’t remember who I am or who my family are.’
‘Odd… you know I also found these.’
It was a small bunch of bananas, he looked at them curiously. ‘These are the strangest looking food I’ve ever seen.’ He bit into one and spat it out. ‘This is the most awful thing.’
I told him that was the skin he had to peel it and eat the fruit inside of it. I grabbed the top, pulled it down and showed him the nice fruit inside.
He ate it within a minute. ‘YUMCHEWSCRUMF that’s delicious! You have to tell me how it was grown!’
‘I don’t know if you can even find them here, they grow in tropical climates.’
A voice behind us shouted. ‘Give us your vittles now!!’
Two female rats were standing close to us but Patrick showed no fear at all. ‘We’ll we ain’t giving it to your cretins so stuff your tails in your mouths and slink off!!’
The one rat sneered. ‘So the rabbit thinks he’s funny eh? I’ll show him how funny he is by ripping out his tongue and shoving it in his ears!’
Patrick sighed. ‘I don’t know why that would be funny but if you insist.’
He jumped in front of the rat and kicked her in the shin and as she kneeled down he kicked her in the jaw with his other foot and then kicked her face several times knocking her senseless.
The other female rat pulled out an axe. ‘You like this axe? It belonged to a Marlfox so it’s magic. With this axe I can’t be beaten.’
‘What’s a Marlfox?’ I whispered to Patrick but he ignored me pulled a dagger from the senseless rat’s belt and threw it expertly at the axe wielding vermin piercing the paw that held the axe.
She dropped it in pain and Patrick grabbed the axe and pointed it at her.
‘Go away and leave us alone or your whole paw comes off next time!’
She spat in anger. ‘Stupid rabbit, I’ll cut off your ears for hurting Slid and your whole stinkin’ head for crippling me!’
Patrick twirled the axe expertly. ‘And you hurting us for no reason is fairer?
She ran into the woods cursing all the woodlanders.
‘That was amazing Patrick!’
I learned a few tricks from my pa, he’s a long patrol general.
He told me all about the long patrol and Salamandastron but I was so afraid of almost being killed I sat down with my head between my knees.
‘Are you okay?’
‘Take me back to my house, please… I don’t want to travel anymore.’
‘But we’re almost there!’
‘Please… back to my house I beg of you!’ I sobbed.
Patrick rolled his eyes. (But I’ll never really know since I was staring at the ground) ‘You call yourself a warrior!?’
‘NO!’ I yelled. ‘I am not a warrior!! I don’t want to fight or get killed! I just want to go back home! But I can’t because my metal thingy is destroyed and I’m trapped here!! I can’t even remember my name or who I am!!’

‘I know who you are’ said Patrick. ‘You are a brave soul who befriended a lonely hare and even though you were afraid of being hurt by vermin you still managed to succeed and where are they now? One is crippled for life and the other I tied to that tree over there none of them will hurt anybeast for a long time.’
‘I succeeded!!?? You did everything! I just sat there in terror I wished I never found that book!’
Patrick eyed me curiously. ‘What book?’ He looked serious.
‘Uh, never mind.’ I didn’t want to say more, if they knew this was a fictional world chaos would ensue, but frankly I didn’t think I was in a book but in the world that the books were supposed to be set in. It’s very complicated and I don’t really know myself but anyway I wanted to go home very badly.
‘Please, I don’t want to be attacked any more let’s go home.’
Patrick huffed. ‘And so we can be attacked by that rat? Vermin don’t forget anything and we both know before long she’ll come back to kill us by herself or more numbers, But the thing is Redwall is a building of peace and kindness they will protect you! It’s just half a day’s march away.
I accepted that we go. I was very curious of what this Redwall place was.
We got there around the evening it was a huge wall with a large building inside. ‘So this is Redwall, very impressive.’
‘You don’t know the half of it, this has survived battle after battle coming on top since before anyone could remember.’
He called up to the top of the wall ‘Hey! Two travelers down here who would like to come in please!’
An old dormouse peeped from the ramparts ‘Are you vermin?’
‘Do we look like blinkin’ vermin!?’ Patrick yelled.
‘Sorry.’ The Dormouse said. ‘My eyesight isn’t as good as it used to be’
Patrick went on. ‘besides! Even if we were vermin would we actually admit to it?’
‘Okay come in… I’ll get skipper to open the door for you.’
A big burly Otter opened the door and let us in, we entered the grounds and it was beautiful! There was an orchard, a pond, gardens, all manner of things and there were baby animals running around playing tag under the watchful eyes of their parents who were gathering crops and otters were swimming in the pond while squirrels were throwing down hard to reach fruit from the tops of trees.
‘This place is beautiful Patrick. Patrick…?’
He was gone, but he came bounding back beside me holding scones.
‘From the kitchen, want one?’
‘You went to the kitchen and back in the whole five seconds I was standing here?’ I asked amazed.
‘Went to the kitchens, sampled some cheese drank some October ale and chatted with the cellarkeeper got some hot scones then came back.’
‘That’s impossible!’
‘You were standing there in awe for at least five minutes, Lots of time.’
An older squirrel was standing around some dibbuns playing with them, he saw me and came up to me.
‘Ahh, You young squirrel. Can you see me in my quarters?’
I was to follow the Abbot in his room even though I have no idea why and I could barely keep up with him he was so excited.
‘Why do you want to talk to me?’
‘All will be explained.’
We entered his room and locked the door. He looked stern. ‘You didn’t tell anyone did you?’
‘Anyone what?’
‘About the Worldkey!’
‘Huh?’ I knew he was nuts.
‘Your clothes, you are from another world. I’m guessing you came here with a metal device called the world key.
I was astonished he knew about that. ‘How did you know I’m from another world!? And the metal thing!’
The abbot just sighed. ‘Because I invented it, if I guess correctly and since you look a bit like me you are my grandson Adam Bond.’
‘That’s my name?’
‘You don’t know who you are!?’
‘No.’
He sat in a chair and shook his head. ‘You must have pressed it too long. That’s alright you are my grandson for sure but don’t tell ANYONE that’s you’re from another world. You didn’t did you?’
‘No.’ I said truthfully.
‘Good, get some sleep we’re having a feast tomorrow!’
‘What about me getting back home?’
‘Why would you want to go home? We’re having a Redwall feast a lot better than thanksgiving dinner back home.’
I sat on the floor looking at the ceiling. ‘You will take me back someday right?’
‘Do you have the Worldkey?’
‘It broke…’
Grandpa got up and turned to the door. ‘The only way to get home is to press the button on the back but since it’s broken you’re here forever… or until I fix it. But for now enjoy what the world is giving you.’
He gave me my own bed and that night I slept in it wondering. ‘What did I get myself into?’

[Dartpaw]

Part 4/5 (The Daiwa mentioned in this book is not the same Daiwa that is related to Dartpaw think of it as a cameo name)

I laid awake all night, things were spinning through my mind…
This old Abbot squirrel was my grandfather?
I am trapped in this fantasy world with talking animals which I am one of now, but I can’t tell them about where I am from even though I don’t remember all that much… I don’t know what to think anymore.
A knocking at my door caught my attention.
‘Yes?’
A small voice piped up from behind the door. ‘My name is Isworth I came to tell you since you’re new that breakfast starts in one hour.’
I got up and went into the hallway which had many doors leading to several dozen more dormitories. I went down the stairs and into the great hall. There were about four or five large tables laid out and many animals were having breakfast.
‘What are we having?’ I asked Patrick.
‘Apple porridge.’
I got a bowl and sat down beside him and a squirrel named Tyone
He looked depressed staring at his bowl of Porridge.
‘What’s wrong?’ I asked him.
‘NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS!!!’ He howled and stormed down to cavern hole.
I was shocked that someone would act like that in such a peaceful place.
Another squirrel named Cindy smiled at me, she was quite beautiful.
‘Oh, don’t mind him he had been like that for years after HE vanished.’
‘Who?’
‘His best friend Daiwa, he was quite young when he disappeared they say he was killed by vermin but his baby brother Sota was gone too… I think they went on a journey to find their parents but no-one knows what happened to them but Tyone never got over their disappearance and he blames skipper for not searching hard enough.'
I felt bad for him, a friend disappearing but that was still no reason to be rude.
Cindy seemed to have read my mind. ‘Don’t be too hard on him. He really is a nice creature, he cries every night in his sleep I sleep in the room next to him so I know.’
I ate my breakfast and sat down under a tree and not knowing what else to do I continued reading Mossflower.
As I was reading Grandpa saw me and ran over.
‘Adam! What are you doing!!!’

‘Reading…’
‘Nobeast should see this! It will disrupt their very way of life if they knew their whole history was written down by someone from another world.’
I sighed. ‘But back home we have written books about history like World war 1&2 the greeks and romans and you know…won’t they just think that it’s just a book about history? I mean in the gatehouse they have all kinds of history records.’
‘But they can’t know about our home world! If will cause chaos and destruction! Give me that book!’
He took it and ran into the abbey, for an old creature he could run fast and as I followed he threw the book into the cavern hole fireplace.
‘I was reading that!’ I shouted in frustration and horror that he’d destroy such a good book.
Grandpa looked grim. ‘How many others do you have?’
‘Why does it matter?’
‘We can’t have some creature stumbling across them!’
I brought three others but the rest are still in the house in the woods.
‘Please! We must destroy them, please….. I beg of you.’ He looked very upset and I knew it was for the best and besides once, I mean IF I get back home I can just read them in the library.
Within ten minutes he burned all my books… which I didn’t like at all but he was really determined to keep the whole (Is a work of fiction in another world thing) secret among the Redwallers.
‘We’re going back to the house and I’m going to fix the device to take you home. But just you and I are going no-one else should know.
We got to the house safe and sound, we entered but the fridge was completely ransacked. Some hungry creature must have stumbled across it but when we went to the attic Grandpa immediately destroyed the books.
He looked at the broken pieces of the device. 'I can fix it but it will take a week let’s go back to the abbey and just have a good time.'
(I was still mad that he destroyed all those awesome books but he said it was for the best)
We left the house and immediately we were upside down hanging from ropes by our feet.
‘Hah! Stupid squirrel! Not so tough without your hare friend are you?’
Grandpa sighed. ‘Please release us, we have done nothing wrong!’
About eight rats appeared the female Patrick crippled was among them, they were all covered in tattoos and piercings. The blood was rushing to my head and grandpa said out loud. ‘I am the abbot of Redwall I demand you let us go! Redwall decrees that a member of the order can go unharmed anywhere and not be hurt by any other creature!’
One of the rats laughed. ‘You expect a vermin to just let you go? We do what we want and kill who we want, it’s our rule and we’ll follow our rules than stupid Redwall rules anyday! Now take us to Redwall so we can give a trade, all your treasures for their abbot and fat squirrel.’
I knew this was going to be a rough day…

[Dartpaw]

The last part.

Grandpa and I were hanging upside down and being prodded with spears.
‘How much treasure do you have at the abbey?’
Grandpa sighed… ‘We don’t care about treasure at Redwall, just good food and hospitality which we will assist you with if you let us go back there.’
A male rat snorted. ‘Yeah right, once we set one paw in there we’ll be attacked by fifty otters! I know what you are like… Cluny the scourge couldn’t beat you so we have no chance to take it over. But we don’t want to take it over but just exchange you for all of your treasures and since you don’t care about treasure you won’t mind if we take it all then.’
‘We don’t care about treasure because we have none…’ Grandpa explained.
As he said that both pieces of the metal device fell out of his pocket.
‘What is this?’
‘Give it back!!’ I yelled.
‘Why?’ A rat asked. ‘It must mean something if you want it back that much.’
‘It means nothing to us!’ Grandpa explained.
‘Then you won’t mind if we take it back to our camp and have our seer look at it to see what it does, don’t worry we’ll come back in a day or two and take you to Redwall to get our reward it’s not like you’ll be going anywhere.’
They ran off laughing.
‘No! If they find out what that can do we’re doomed!’
‘Why?’ I asked.
‘Why!? You want to know why!!?? If they fix it and use it go back to our home world they’ll cause chaos.’
‘But it’s 2075 our police have disintegrator rays so if they try to kill or steal they’ll just get zapped into dust.’
Grandpa yelled in anger, ‘Don’t you understand!? If they see giant rats in our world they’ll wonder how they came to be and will capture the rats and interrogate them, the rats will cough up information about the device and how it can take people to other worlds and then what I feared most will happen. The humans will use the device to go to other worlds and take them over by war or force and turn them into tourist attractions! Come vacation in scenic middle-earth where hobbits will be your slaves and tend to all your needs in this resort.
We can’t let that happen! We have to stop the rats!’
Just then a rustling came from the bushes.
It was Cindy.
‘Why are you two hung upside down? I followed you because I was worried about you. You ran off so quickly.’
‘Can you please untie us? We have to get this item that was stolen by rats.’
She untied us and was about to jump in a tree ‘I’ll go get the otters.’
‘No! We can’t let the otters do this.’ Said Grandpa. ‘It’s something young Adam and I must do alone.’
‘No! Adam will get hurt! I can’t let him go fight rats.’
She was obviously smitten with me.
I said. ‘Cindy, go back. Your family needs you and it will help me if you stay out of this.’
But she wouldn’t listen. ‘What is this thing that was stolen anyway?’
‘I can’t tell you.’ Said Grandpa.
‘I’m coming anyway, if Adam gets in trouble I’ll protect him! He’s too nice to be hurt in any way.

The vermin camp was abuzz with anticipation when the rat seer looked at the broken device. ‘Hmm… I see… this is a very strange thing I hold. I can tell it is very important I can sense someone wants it very badly…’
One of the rats yelled. ‘Who cares!? What does it do?’
‘I do not know yet but I can mend it with the right equipment. Just attach this part to this and it will work but we need something to hold it together… it’s too small for rope. Some tree sap will do.’
A rat got some tree sap and gave it to the seer. ‘Just connect these two pieces and it should be as good as new.
A slingstone whacked the seer in the paw and she swore loudly and yelled. ‘We’re under attack!!’
The three of us sat in the trees throwing rocks which was quite dumb at the time but as soon as they came running up to us Cindy leaped from tree to tree jumped down and grabbed the now fixed device now many vermin were chasing her but she was too fast for any weapon to strike her. ‘Where do we go now!!??’ She yelled frantically.
Grandpa shouted ‘To the house!’
We could see my house in the distance and we ran with the vermin on our tails. But the three of us got in and we locked the door with vermin pounding on the outside walls and thrusting spears in the door.

Grandpa said quickly. ‘Use the device! Hold it for eight seconds since that was the amount it took you to get here!’
I pushed the button for eight seconds. The vermin were shouting.
They were pounding at the door and almost knocking it down.
Then suddenly we vanished the three of us and the house.
The vermin looked in amazement as the home they were attacking was now like it was never there.
I felt dizzy and sat on the couch. Grandpa was there now human, as was Cindy.
We told her the whole story of what happened to us and the device.
Grandpa smiled. ‘Adam you leave the room and I’ll take Cindy back home.’
‘But the rats!’
‘They will be gone soon enough when they realize there’s nothing to attack’
Cindy sat beside me. ‘No! I want to stay.’
‘But Redwall!!’ Grandpa said.
‘phooey, I had no family I was an orphan I wanted another life to see amazing things out of the woods and I want to be with Adam. I’ll miss him.’
‘If that’s what you want…’ said Grandpa. ‘I’ll go back to Redwall as Abbot and say the two of you went on a long journey but I will drop the device as soon as I push it so I will go but the device stays here.’
My memory was back since I returned but I had to say. ‘But that means unless we go back to get you you’ll be trapped there forever!’
‘I wouldn’t want it any other way…’ And he pressed the button and vanished back to the Redwall world.
As for Cindy and I we became best friends, Mom adopted her and I showed her the life of how humans lived and she caught on quick and we well… really liked each-other and became best friends. Going to Redwall wasn’t so bad, but I’ll miss Patrick and the others maybe someday I’ll go back to Redwall or maybe next time Middle-earth, Narnia, who knows what the future holds but for me and Cindy, friendship lasts forever.

You’re probably wondering what my family thought of the house vanishing… or when it came back with a girl they never saw before.
Oddly I was only gone for two hours and no-one noticed a thing.
Strange huh? Yeah that’s pretty weird but some people told my mom the house was missing for a short time but she didn’t believe them.
But what is in store for me, I don’t know but this device will come in very handy on a boring day.

The End.

That's my story... and if you're thought it was cheesy that a love interest happened so suddenly in just one scene.
It wasn't a romance but she did have a tiny crush, and they just became friends afterwards (they may start dating I dunno but for now they are just friends)
And while reading this over I was like... (Did Daiwa get sent to another world? Or just vanish? I can't remember what really went on with him when I wrote that I think he and his brother just went away on a journey but I know I had some hidden message/reference with that somehow)

(Reading this over I realized how the vermin fixed it was kind of dumb. Especially when his grandfather said it would take a week to fix.)